天维春晚2021

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prelude

Time to mate, it is a game Nai played many times, all day, every day. She is good at it, plus she got everything, with a pair of outstanding long legs, well shaped body, dressed to kill, her light pink skin glows like younger girls when she is aroused, beautiful face, not too much and not too little, a perfect, a perfect astute Shanghainese, and no one knows she is the master of the game mentored by master Nine who is now a well-known bussiness guru in Auckland. But this time, there are something different, she wants to play it in a different way, in a way that nothing can be foreseeable. She has made up her mind, not a single soul is gonna be out of her control. She recalled master Nine's word after a blow job years ago  in his bedroom, "a bird in the hand is better than two in the bush", why she has never thought about it before, but now, it gives her a clear indication about what has to be done to fill the gap left by the lost of master Nine. She also knows a woman's beauty is no better than her mind, but what if she got both, after all, she had never failed on any game she played before. But right now, she needs a man to cure her pain, the pain of a heartbreaking lost.

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salesonline 发表于 2021-3-28 23:55
prelude

Time to mate, it is a game Nai played many times, all day, every day. She is good at it, pl ...

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈，，，，，写作有所突破嘛，，，


讲真，你接的还是不错的，不过前面的那个老北写的，虽然蛮好笑的，但实际情况是不太现实的，这么说吧，把足迹写得为了和鼠在一起，要弄死九爷，这一招太蠢了，这个必须要给个理由啊，足迹的智商按你这么分析，你们说说，去最后选择为鼠不惜代价哦，嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎嘎，，那有没有看到这样的选择，足迹是属于作死的节奏不是嘛，，图啥呀？图啊啥哟？哈哈哈哈哈，，，先帮足迹想好了，这会有啥好日子过呀？以至于非要去弄死九爷啊？这是不是病得不轻啊？哈哈哈哈哈

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留下足迹 发表于 2021-3-29 08:10
哈哈哈哈哈哈哈，，，，，写作有所突破嘛，，，

你想要和鼠在一起吗  

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salesonline 发表于 2021-3-29 08:12
你想要和鼠在一起吗

你觉得足迹会有如此想法吗？哈哈哈哈哈哈哈

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chaper one master Nine


Master Nine is standing in front of his desk outlooking the seaside views over his shoulders. His mansion is sitting in the most expensive location, queen street, gross value is over $3 billion. With numerous properities and investments all over New Zealand and Australia, Master Nine is no longer the then so called poor bachelor 10 years ago, he has everything he wants to have, and he is never tired of having more women running around him, all kinds of women, young, cute, smart...

"Guru", he talked to himself with a sneering smile over the corner of his lips.
"That is a bullshit", he is looking at himself carefully in the mirror.
"I am not a Guru", he finally murmured at a low voice as he decides to ignore the bold fat man in front of him.
"I just got lucky with a large sum of overseas investment to startup, people are being stupid!!!"

All of his past just like pages flipped in front of his eyes, memories carried him to somewhere else.

The Papatoetoe leisure time spent with Nai......

"Get me to Nai", he shouts to the other end as he's picking up the phone.

"Hello, who's there?", Nai's soft voice is singing over the phone like an invisible hand soothing his nerves.

"Nai, it is me. I want to talk to you, come over here, baby, I can't wait, let's get married", Nine's words rushed out of his mouth without hesitation.

"Are you drunk?", she instantly recognized his voice and said sharply.

"No, no, I am not, I am, er, I am serious", Nine is getting nevious and stammering.

"well, you know I can't", she said swift but firmly.

"Please, Nai, I really need you, I can't live without you", his heart is beating fast, hands are shaking.

"Nine, it is too late, I got my family, and you knew it, stop calling me again", she hung up the phone.

Nine was stunned and staring at the phone in his left hand, he got everything but only one missed, his heart broke.

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留下足迹 发表于 2021-3-29 08:15
你觉得足迹会有如此想法吗？哈哈哈哈哈哈哈

那时显然啦，走着瞧啦，哈哈哈哈  

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salesonline 发表于 2021-3-29 08:27
那时显然啦，走着瞧啦，哈哈哈哈

好的，好的，暂且先跟着你的感觉走吧，，哈哈哈哈哈哈

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chapter two big mouth rat

Big mouth rat was famous for his mouth, he always gossips, no matter what is happening right now, he is going to make fun of it and humiliate erveryone in the story.

Everybody loves raymond, but not everyone hates Big mouth rat.

One day, Moonlight came to his house in New Lynn.

"I brought you some food, canned fish and toast bread", Moonlight almost spit on Rat as he is handing the bag to Rat, he is a big fan of Rat, he loves every word Rat says.

"Can you believe it? That costs only $1.10, unbeatable price, isn't it?", he loves to see the joyful response on Rat's face.

"Shut up, I am busy", Rat cut into his talk.

"That bitch, I am going to kick her ass this time", he tilt a little and lean over to the shinning screen, a malicious look came upon his twisted face.

"No one can beat me, I am the No.1"

"Of couse you are, and I am coming with you", Moonlight added, he started to realize what he is getting into.

"Shut up, did I just say shut up?", Rat almost pushed down Moonlight.

"Get out of my sight"
  
"I will let her feel the pain, as painful as I had", Rat spoke with angry as he was grabing the bag Moonlight brought to him.

"Where did you get it?", Rat said to his pal while Moonglight was freaking in the corner, his voice calmed down a little.

"The Warehouse", Moonlight hasitate to answer.

"Which one?", Rat asked.

"The red one", Moonlight was back to normal.

"I am asking you where did you get it, you fool", Rat was getting high again.

"Er, Manukau"

"Alright, let's go get them all, it is delicious and cheap", Rat rushed to the door, jump into his raggy toyota, started the engine and drove away without looking at Moonlight.

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留下足迹 发表于 2021-3-29 03:10
哈哈哈哈哈哈哈，，，，，写作有所突破嘛，，，

奶姨，您年纪不大眼神却不好啊。

那明明是  惊魂   写的，怎么扣我头上了。

FML高手如云，我哪敢像他那样 厚着脸皮献丑。

我们过去一起在别的网站玩，他在那写惊悚故事，那些玩意我都看过，就是一古龙流毒，阴毛+反转

大概率给你们定的基调就是  你是某个组织头号杀手  鼠爷是某组织头头  九爷是大亨兼黑帮老大   为了什么利益，你们互相利用 互相坑 互相演戏。最后结局，肯定是鼠爷 九爷 互杀，你杀了剩下的，最后被窥探外面的另一方势力灭掉。

嘿嘿，就他这思路和智商，我早就劝他别在这玩了，这里不是十八九岁毛孩子的基地，他的文风不会受欢迎的。

估计再挨两次骂，他也就歇了。

老北

三 少爷 发表于 2021-3-29 04:42
A picture is worth a thousand words. 本导的剧本已这么清楚明了还用再大费篇章解释？

请理解一下天维 ...

三少误会了，我的意思是  写的人  只能按图里标明的关系写?不可随意拼接关系?

巴依老爷

三 少爷 发表于 2021-3-29 13:52
扒一女友在这剧本中还是夫人要看这电影？还未上画就先撇清一切所用关系了。：）

爱和胡闹的小厮们厮混对 ...

在论坛上我还是喜欢蕾丝哥更多一些
至少这哥们活的真实，有勇气敢于面对别人的讥笑和嘲讽
不过兔子不吃窝边草
弄到原来图帝和奶姨一样神仙情侣在论坛打情骂俏这可不是我的风格
现实生活我是直接扑倒那类，这里我就不叫了，谁让我是咬人的狗呢~
玩儿我也不会在论坛玩的

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三 少爷 发表于 2021-3-29 13:48
看本导没看错人吧？知道兄台为什么没上榜吗？早知你对三少就不友好。哼！ ...

贱导息怒，小的不想当主角，小的喜欢看戏

图帝@-@

hj_win_1 发表于 2021-3-29 14:55
贱导息怒，小的不想当主角，小的喜欢看戏

舊瓶裝新酒，靠幾條過氣老鬼撑場，了無新意，閃吧。