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他正在写小说，已经写了九章了。 我就节选一段参加征文吧！ 儿子说前面没什么意思，只是介绍，中间才开始有意思。我就截中间的来。我担心会被扔鸡蛋哪，因为我也不知道他写的是什么 ... ...
我问儿子，要不要参加学童版的征文活动，儿子同意，并且把他自己写的书发给我。他正在写小说，已经写了九章了。 我就节选一段参加征文吧！ 儿子说前面没什么意思，只是介绍，中间才开始有意思。我就截中间的来。我担心会被扔鸡蛋哪，因为我也不知道他写的是什么 ... ...
The 12 Isles of Ahntoneo
安东尼奥的12个小岛
(By Jerry Li, 11 years old)
Long ago on an opal sea, there was a country called Ahntoneo. Ahntoneo was an outcrop of land jutting out of a country called Fertila. Then came a time when a great tragedy struck Fertila, an evil sorcerer whose name those would later fear: Akmamen. He struck like a bolt of lightning bringing disaster to the land; he enslaved the people, hideously changed the beasts of burden then finally he fought those few survivors who had not succumb to despair. They however were no match against Akmamen, not even their great protector; the great birds were no match against him or his gokawks: huge hawks whose talons were made of metal and feathers lined with blood and made of steel. That night everyone could feel and hear the evil presence of the gokawks and even more: the scarlet cloud who was Akmamen.
Even the dragons in Ahntoneo could not breathe flame or happiness into them; it was as though the fall of Fertila had deadened all who was living. Little did they know that they would have their own sequel of Fertila.
***
Twelve years later Akmamen’s greed could not wait, he attacked Ahntoneo. However, this time he was unprepared for the dragons, beasts and magic he would face, within moments he was ousted. Irritated at his subjects he cooked up a new plan. He would steal those secret herbs kept in the palace gardens of Ahn. Akmamen stole away for many more years then finally the moment arrived, the year of the snake had come, the year that evil would conquer, the year that the giant emerald snake constellation called Serpenta would be directly overhead. At New Year’s night after the clock struck 12, Akmamen slipped into the palace. His moment had come. He headed back to Fertila, now called the Lands of Shadow when a huge yellow dragon soared into view, Akmamen knew how dangerous these mythical beasts were, he tried to escape but found himself tailed by the great yellow beast. The dragon breathed yellow fire and the scarlet cloud turned to ash at the edges, then in a puff of smoke, he vanished; with the herbs.
***
Long ago there were 12 magic herbs which when mixed into a brew it can cure every disease. Then a sorcerer called Akmamen stole them away from the palace garden, and hid them away in the twelve most fearful and dangerous isles in Ahntoneo. Much later when ten generations had passed the sorcerer inflicted a terrible disease to the people of Ahntoneo and the only remedy was the twelve magic herbs.
King John had fallen seriously ill to the disease. His son Prince Peter was only a teenager when his father had died of the terrible illness. Fearful for his life he went to Jake the old librarian the only question on his mind “how can this awful disease be stopped?” Peter asked. Jake jumped then turned “ah king Peter so pleased to see you, oh yes the disease hmm as far as I know the only way to cure or indeed wipe out the disease is to find the twelve isles where the twelve magic herbs are hidden, and because no one has touched them they will be simply abundant.” Peter gazed at him. “Oh yes of course you don’t even know about it yet, right” so that night the two went on discussing on their plan to bring back the secret of the herbs. So it was that the following night found Peter and his uncle Josef sneaking out into the night armed with 2 daggers and 2 swords and a bow and arrows each. They were on a mission to find those 12 magic herbs hidden on 12 isles. However, the evil Akmamen had sensed them and awoke a terrible guardian for each herb, but of course, that would never deter Peter and his uncle.
***
The only evidence they had to which isles the herbs where hidden was an ancient manuscript, which was thought lost long ago:
The twelve magic herbs were once up and growing in the famed herb garden of Ahn Palace, then on the 40th night of the year of the snake, an evil year that is where illnesses spread and stay the guards were enchanted sleep for a year and a day. There were craters and pockmarks in the palace garden and the magic herbs were nowhere to be seen, they were stolen. Several villages reported that Akmamen’s 12 giant birds called gohawks carried the herbs. They were flying low over these places: The Isle of the Pit, The Isle of the Desert Sands, The Isle of the Castle of Amenkek, The Isle of the Mankeep Trees, The Glacier Isle, The Isle of the Beast, The Isle of the Dreaming Forest, The Isle of the Great Serpent Ranser, The Isle of the Ghost Ship, The Isle of the Black Castle, The Isle of the Beastly Plain and The Isle of the Disappearing Castle.
The companions journeyed to The Isle of the Pit Cliff first but they were going to get a nasty shock.
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-6 23:14
谢谢分享！！！
我得慢慢查字典。。。。
AUGUSTUS 发表于 2013-8-6 20:41
哇，好多詞我都不會哦。。。。
這是一篇兒童徵文嗎？
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:23
那啥。。崔大哥呢？让他给个翻译版！~~
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-6 23:24
这，好像有点大材小用。。。。
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-6 23:24
这，好像有点大材小用。。。。
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:24
给评分吧。。。
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:27
崔大哥语言诙谐幽默，很有才华，他给翻译，肯定是一篇非常可爱的版本：）
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:26
实用是非常重要的。。你在网上遇到他，烦劳转告一声
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:26
实用是非常重要的。。你在网上遇到他，烦劳转告一声
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-6 23:45
收到，版主！
我已完成你交给我光荣而艰巨的任务了。。。
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:47
看到你转达了，
你还要督促他完成这个艰巨的任务，我先睡觉去了。。。
晚安
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-6 23:23
那啥。。崔大哥呢？让他给个翻译版！~~
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-6 23:53
这，我怕我不够FACE哦。。。。
希望他不要我来一招一哭，二闹，三上吊。。。。。
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-7 08:39
安妮发令
崔哥遵旨
今日之内
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-7 09:30
哈哈！~~~ 先谢谢啦。。。
楼主小朋友，在写书呢，这篇翻译完了，我让他妈妈把整个书发给你，你给批评 ...
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-7 09:44
简直是神童啊！了不起！
AUGUSTUS 发表于 2013-8-7 12:05
您也是這樣覺得的？
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-7 13:30
我在等崔大哥的翻译版
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-7 08:50
早晨，ann.
你系我好友，如果不俾你面，咁，仲俾边个？
区区小事，何须挂齿！今日之内，完成任 ...
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-8 01:04
唔该哂阿，崔大哥！
我唔好意思叫你在百忙之中仲同我哋做翻译，我都知你近排忙于在起点文学网
嘅事，等 ...
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-8 01:07
也请我饮茶吗?哈哈!咱们周日11点见!
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-8 01:12
那是不成问题滴。。。。
看看哪天你俩都有空，一起请。。。。。
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-8 07:28
我很多时候用手机版就没看到回复，抱歉。。。。
你是要从汉米尔顿开过来？
是!~annie0002 发表于 2013-8-8 07:36
是!~
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-8 01:07
也请我饮茶吗?哈哈!咱们周日11点见!
ann-james 发表于 2013-8-8 01:04
唔该哂阿，崔大哥！
我唔好意思叫你在百忙之中仲同我哋做翻译，我都知你近排忙于在起点文学网
嘅事，等 ...
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-8 08:38
唔使客气，ann.
my pleasure!
唔紧要，我仲有大把时间去做起点嘅嘢。
涛声依旧 发表于 2013-8-16 19:24
这12岁的年龄可以写出超想象力的作品，很有写作天赋！
问一下，楼主妈妈是这样培养出来超水平学生？
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-16 21:09
实话说我不会英文。他小的时候我象他姐姐一样疯玩，差不多踏遍了哈吨的山山水水，差点没把waikato河用石头 ...
涛声依旧 发表于 2013-8-17 14:12
喔，那小朋友就是自学成才了！
作为华人孩子，家庭文化背景不同，相对英文写作方面是弱项，现在的写作 ...
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-16 21:09
实话说我不会英文。他小的时候我象他姐姐一样疯玩，差不多踏遍了哈吨的山山水水，差点没把waikato河用石头 ...
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-17 16:59
您给他夸大奖了！能不能成才要看他成长中的造化了。我正为他苦脑，他会随着他自己的想象写，可是正常的书 ...
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-17 16:59
您给他夸大奖了！能不能成才要看他成长中的造化了。我正为他苦脑，他会随着他自己的想象写，可是正常的书 ...
涛声依旧 发表于 2013-8-18 17:40
妈妈还是辛苦呀，在幼儿时给他念书的早教，好妈妈！
那你给他念的是英文书还是中文书呀？
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-17 17:27
学习啦~ 快乐的生活，才是创造的源泉~~~
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-19 14:05
你准备好了长征了吗？
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-19 14:06
已经上路的，你看我多认真地学习啊！~~
改天带儿子去找哥哥玩
看到这满眼的英文，有点眼晕！长杨堂 发表于 2013-8-31 21:01
才九岁啊！了不起。
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:05
你真逗！怎么11看成9的呀？
长杨堂 发表于 2013-8-31 21:10
文章里有，11,12,2就是没有9.我的眼睛真的有问题了
。开玩笑了，可加入AA有免费测眼是真的。麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:12
加入AA,可获免费测眼。。开玩笑了，可加入AA有免费测眼是真的。
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:12
加入AA,可获免费测眼。。开玩笑了，可加入AA有免费测眼是真的。
长杨堂 发表于 2013-8-31 21:13
这篇文章居然被才子翻译了，还是看中文的吧。不要为难自己了。
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-8 08:38
唔使客气，ann.
my pleasure!
唔紧要，我仲有大把时间去做起点嘅嘢。
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-31 21:18
你给翻译的那个，顶帖加分也都算原作者的成绩吧？你不介意吧？
长杨堂 发表于 2013-8-31 21:17
糖画是个什么东西？
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:22
糖画是我们中国的民间艺术。我脸谱上有视频，欢迎来围观：www.tangarts.co.nz
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:22
糖画是我们中国的民间艺术。我脸谱上有视频，欢迎来围观：www.tangarts.co.nz
长杨堂 发表于 2013-8-31 21:24
图片上是你真人吗
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:20
我沉默好了。
长杨堂 发表于 2013-8-31 21:31
我第一次知道Ahntoneo是这么拼的。
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-31 21:18
你给翻译的那个，顶帖加分也都算原作者的成绩吧？你不介意吧？
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-31 21:37
安东尼奥？
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-31 21:37
安东尼奥？
麽麽 发表于 2013-8-31 21:18
是的，有了翻译版我才看了他到底在写什么呢。感谢崔哥，为孩子这么认真！
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-31 21:49
哥也是为人之父，应该做的嘛！哈哈。。
祝你宝贝儿子学习进步，中英文都越来越棒！
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-31 21:39
当然不介意啦，哈哈。。实至名归，乐见其成！
annie0002 发表于 2013-8-31 22:25
KATY的儿子，一定有大量的英文阅读基础，才会自己写小说：）
jkcui 发表于 2013-8-31 22:35
是这样滴！那小家伙真的很有想象力，是个好苗子！
annie0002 发表于 2013-9-13 15:10
麽麽 发表于 2013-9-13 20:58
感觉象是上了场竟选市长的紧张兴奋气氛。功夫不负劳心人，真诚的感谢朋友们的捧场！！
annie0002 发表于 2013-9-13 21:13
争取要儿子来领奖啊！让爸爸带来玩？小朋友都有礼物的
麽麽 发表于 2013-9-14 11:49
还是请崔哥上台帮领吧，然后复制奖品一份给他，呵呵，以表对他的感谢。再劳烦你给我儿子带回来奖品怎么样 ...
麽麽 发表于 2013-9-14 11:49
还是请崔哥上台帮领吧，然后复制奖品一份给他，呵呵，以表对他的感谢。再劳烦你给我儿子带回来奖品怎么样 ...
annie0002 发表于 2013-9-14 15:24
你站内消息，或者跟他的帖子邀请他都可以，他几乎都在网上的
最好的建议：你或者你儿子写一篇 感谢崔哥 ...
麽麽 发表于 2013-9-17 10:23
我是计划带着孩子们全家去的，可是人算不如天算，有突发事件，去不了了。我托了崔哥领奖安妮帮带回来。在这 ...
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