标题: 学童版征文(学童作品 26)—— A Wonderful Day [打印本页] 作者: AUGUSTUS 时间: 2013-7-29 19:30:26 标题: 学童版征文(学童作品 26)—— A Wonderful Day
本帖最后由 annie0002 于 2013-8-17 00:00 编辑
我閨女今天的一篇日記。有語法錯誤,但為體現孩子的實際水平,不作語法修改。
A Wonderful Day
Rachel Chang, Age 6, Year 2, Willowbank School, Botany
Today when I was at school I saw my teacher was not Mrs Scott. It was Mrs Willmen. She is a nan because she is even older than my grandpa and grandma.
Today is Awhina Mufti Day. My Awhina colour is Blue so I am wearing in Blue. Today is sausage day too. At lunch time we can have some milk. I chose chocolate milk. It is so yum. I also had a sausage.
At class we have a Marble Party. I love Marble Party it is so fun. We had Jump Jam in the morning too.
It is a Wonderful Day.
[attach]514636[/attach] 作者: AUGUSTUS 时间: 2013-7-29 19:35:23
You are a very smart girl, Rachel.
That is really a wonderful day at school!
Well done! Good start!
Wish you all the best at school.
Uncle Jack作者: 1313xiaohua 时间: 2013-8-2 14:21:53
ni 你话你女2年级,能自己写日记。好叻啊。作者: AUGUSTUS 时间: 2013-8-2 14:46:14
1313xiaohua 发表于 2013-8-2 13:21
ni 你话你女2年级,能自己写日记。好叻啊。
女孩作业水平果然好。
我儿7岁了,阅读没问题,写作说来惭愧,从不写长文,都是寥寥数句了事。。。
比如叫他写MY BROTHER, 他就写:MY BROTHER, HELPFUL BROTHER, KIND BROTHER, HAPPY BROTHER, COOPERATIVE BROTHER, SPORTY BROTHER...连写了十来个形容词,最后来一句I LOVE MY BROTHER。
叫他写MY DAD,他写:I KISS MY DAD, I HUG MY DAD, I LOVE MY DAD EVEN WHEN HE IS GRUMPY, BECAUSE WE TAKE CARE OF EACH OTHER AND WE ARE HAPPY FAMILY. 完事了。
在家写过的最多的东西就是满满三页纸的THINGS I AM SCARED OF。词汇量很好,雪崩海啸都知道,就是不成文。然后就是他自己写的“书”:精简版诺亚方舟。自己用胶水“装订”了。他最喜欢的圣经故事。
我就看我儿的BRIGHT SIDE了。作者: annie0002 时间: 2013-8-13 22:44:50